File talk:Scalingproposal.odt

Minor grammar errors

Page 1, "Business Model," 2nd sentence: "Our business model is calls for an on-site crew of 12 skilled fabricators (currently we have recruited 3) ..." Strike "is."

Page 3, "Milestone Achievement," 2nd paragraph/chart descriptor: "To remain on schedule, and to guarantee expanding earning potential - the following numbers of prototypes (blue line -150 total, for 50 full product releases (orange line)) should be achieved:" ... Use a comma instead of a dash to delineate phrase; most professional writing styles call for nested parentheticals graduate (per level in) from ( to [ to { and matching closed }, ] and ).

"Keys to Success," 4th sentence: "The keys to success are (1), recruiting skilled prototypers to accelerate development ; (2) optimization of production infrastructure and ergonomics within a 6 month period from Jan. 2012; (3) maintaining low development costs by globalo, collaborative, open source product development; (4) in-house capacity for scrap metal melting and rolling - to reduce material costs to the price of scrap steel; (5) and eliminating energy costs via renewable bio-fuels and solar concentrator energy." The in-paragraph numbered list might work better formatted as a line-per-item numbered list (using OpenOffice's 'Numbering' feature); "globalo" likely a typo for "global." --Howard V. Agnew 01:38, 26 September 2011 (CEST)